Moves too slowly.
Graphics: Very nice graphics!
Style: Wayyyy tooo slow. Need to increase the speed of the plot development ofr something like that. Like your plot, pretty original.
Sound: The sound seems to lag behind by a couple of seconds. Could also use some voice acting.
For each attempt did he die or just get hurt? That is very confusing. Anyways, pretty good, just speed up the next episode. There will be another one, right?
Well, this was my first flash submit so I didn't expect to get a showcase or nuttin. Thanks for the criticism, I will try and speed it up some if I make another episode. As for him dying, ya he died but in MMORPG's when you never are permenantly dead.
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Graphics: Above average graphics. I say this because some parts were amazing while some parts were lousy. Some lousy parts were the blood effects and the Christmas tree.
Style: Very nice style. Caught that serious effect that does not come very often with clock movies. Love the fading techniques at the appropriate times.
Sound: No clock voices? I guess it would ruin the seriousness of the movie. But very effective music. Could've had some slight fire sound effects when the house was burning.
Is there going to be anymore of this series? Doesn't look like since this had very good closure. Unless... Heaven comes down and kills all clocks!
Thanks for the 10 :)
I have fixed up the blood now so it looks alot better. i didn't want to add fire sounds because it would of ruined the music.
I might continue the series.
Wha??
Graphics: One of the better clock movies, graphic-wise.
Style: Shoud've at least explained the premise of the movie. Didn't really realise it was about recycling and Earthday until they started throwing the biohazardous material in the recyling bin. That part was too long. Well, its a good message to convey at least. Love the easter egg. It was SUPER cool.
Sound: No sound effects? Not even any classic clock voices? The music sucked. It kept on changing and it didn't fit the movie very well at all.
Wonder what you will be making next. Something serious or something stupid? Just make sure that it has some good sound effects in it, okay?
This one was supposed to have no speech..I though the music fitted well :\
Have a clockerific day :)
Very nice!
Graphics: Mostly bitmaps and the parts that were animated were pretty choppy.
Style: Loved the style! Not too many history flashes are this good.
Sound: This song is perfect for the movie.
Interactivity: Needs a replay button.
Hope you get a good mark on your project.
Yes, thankyou, I will upload a new version with a replay button, can't believe I forgot that. I hope I get a good grade to, we watch it in class the 29th.
What the hell was that all about??
Graphics: SOOOOO smooth! Excellent work.
Style: Like you said in your comments, its too short. But I won't bother complaining about it.
Sound: Good sound effects, don't think the music rightly fit the movie though.
Interactivity: Make the button to start it and to replay bigger or have a hit area.
Keep up the good stuff man!
ok! i will update it soon!
Okay....
Well that was certainly true to its name - Mario Short. And I mean short. No plot at all. Hardly any animation. And to top it off it was a humongous file size for the shortness of the movie. You have to compress your audio or only put in a clip of it. Next time you submit a short, make to longer.
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Graphics: Awsome for a stick movie.
Stlye: No real plot. But with stick movies there hardly ever is. The ending didn't really show the outcome of both of them. Not very clear if they both died or only one did. Liked the random preloader and the fullscreen thing on the top. Very original.
Sound: Sould've used sound effects, but the music by itself was alright.
Make more! Make more!
Lol I still haven't decided if the black guy died or not. Or the blue guy. Or both, or neither.
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