Huh?
Graphics: Very good graphics!
Style: Um, was this just a way to get hits to your website? Is that why it ends so abruptly? Don't submit uncompleted stuff. Not long enough to tell if it was really about.
Sound: Great voice acting.
Humour: Not long enough to tell if it was going to be funny.
I hope you decide to put the finished thing on here, instead of this movie. And if its good, which it probably will, then put the whole series on here.
Yes and no. I don't have ads on my site or anything, so I'm not concerned about hits, but I do want to get the fact that I have "starter" fla's available to the public. I just want to encourage people to do animation. This is one of those open-source .fla's.
Moves too slowly.
Graphics: Very nice graphics!
Style: Wayyyy tooo slow. Need to increase the speed of the plot development ofr something like that. Like your plot, pretty original.
Sound: The sound seems to lag behind by a couple of seconds. Could also use some voice acting.
For each attempt did he die or just get hurt? That is very confusing. Anyways, pretty good, just speed up the next episode. There will be another one, right?
Well, this was my first flash submit so I didn't expect to get a showcase or nuttin. Thanks for the criticism, I will try and speed it up some if I make another episode. As for him dying, ya he died but in MMORPG's when you never are permenantly dead.
Very innovative.
Graphics: Very good, although some of the time I can't tell what exactly the picture is supposed to be of.
Style: You have a very unique style to the whole web-comic thing. Its very effective. I think a different font for the text should've been used. Or just use italics. It adds to the comicy feel to it.
Sound: Music was appropriately chosen for the movie. Maybe have some sound effects for certain frames of the comic. Like a police siren for the police chase part and a gunshot for gunshots.
Interactivity: Should make the hit area for each frame actually for the whole frame, not just the black spots. The white spots are unclickable and just make it annoying. Also, have a replay button at the end.
This series is going to be great, that is, if you continue it, which I hope you will.
Nice joke.
Graphics: Above average graphics. Drawings and animation was okay. It had its moments.
Style: Interesting take on Satan and God. So Keanu Reeves is Satan... Never actually thought he'd be the actual "One" The credits at the beginning go wayyyy too slow.
Sound: Voices are really scratchy. The music quality is pretty bad too.
Since, this is your first movie/submission, I'll just say keep up the good work.
I love you mommy!
Graphics: Above average graphics. I say this because some parts were amazing while some parts were lousy. Some lousy parts were the blood effects and the Christmas tree.
Style: Very nice style. Caught that serious effect that does not come very often with clock movies. Love the fading techniques at the appropriate times.
Sound: No clock voices? I guess it would ruin the seriousness of the movie. But very effective music. Could've had some slight fire sound effects when the house was burning.
Is there going to be anymore of this series? Doesn't look like since this had very good closure. Unless... Heaven comes down and kills all clocks!
Thanks for the 10 :)
I have fixed up the blood now so it looks alot better. i didn't want to add fire sounds because it would of ruined the music.
I might continue the series.
Meh.
Graphics: Guns were drawn nicely and the blood too. The stick figures were not very well animated nor any of the animation.
Style: Counter Strike is too overused. Nothing original here. Sticks killing sticks in a CS game.
Sound: Some of the sounds were off cue. Otherwise, appropriate use of sounds.
If you make this a series, improve your animation skills.
Violence can save us all!
Graphics: You can do special effects and animation pretty well. But your drawing sucks.
Style: Like the little text cutscenes. Not much plot development though. Also, a bit short.
Sound: Good sound effects and music.
Good overall, but a little short. Keep up the good work.
Wha??
Graphics: One of the better clock movies, graphic-wise.
Style: Shoud've at least explained the premise of the movie. Didn't really realise it was about recycling and Earthday until they started throwing the biohazardous material in the recyling bin. That part was too long. Well, its a good message to convey at least. Love the easter egg. It was SUPER cool.
Sound: No sound effects? Not even any classic clock voices? The music sucked. It kept on changing and it didn't fit the movie very well at all.
Wonder what you will be making next. Something serious or something stupid? Just make sure that it has some good sound effects in it, okay?
This one was supposed to have no speech..I though the music fitted well :\
Have a clockerific day :)
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